documenting the demise of the great american empire from the road (1)

28 Feb


photo: James Reeves

somewhere on rt. 61 in missouri
we stopped at the steak-n-shake
valeriu bought a postcard
and i got the patty melt for $2.95
he smoked
and i spiked my coke with rum
we watched a tumbleweed roll across the front lot
he wrote back home in flowery penmanship
having a time
wish i wasn’t here
we found fifteen cents in the glove compartment
and tacked on a stamp
when you decide to go on the road
and write about it
i think it’s best you start somewhere in the middle
close to the heart of the thing

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6 Responses to “documenting the demise of the great american empire from the road (1)”

  1. varioni 28/02/2010 at 11:19 AM #

    i too have visited a stead-n-shake on rte 66 at night. it was down the street from my apartment. and this is pretty much what it felt like. even back in illinois. nice piece. i like it.

  2. (S)wine 28/02/2010 at 11:26 AM #

    thank you much

  3. vibes01 28/02/2010 at 1:53 PM #

    it read like a tumbleweed….replicating the vision for me to see….

  4. vibes01 28/02/2010 at 5:40 PM #

    eek…that was meant to be a compliment by the way! haha

  5. (S)wine 01/03/2010 at 9:22 AM #

    got it originally. thanks much.

  6. vibes01 01/03/2010 at 4:20 PM #

    :)

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